Revised Storyboard

New Storyboard

 

From feedback and further research we decided to revise our storyboard, adding in new camera angles and new shots and changing a few of them.

• We decided from looking at other noir style films that we wanted main character narration throughout our trailer, therefore we looked at what we could say and we added a few lines of main protagonist narration to our trailer tp help get the film across but still not giving too much away.  
• We also decided that we wanted to add a dramatic sound bridge of walking feet to link with what is happening at that moment with what was happening in that shot.
•  Then we added a skewed close up shot of feet walking,this shot gives an extra noir feel to the trailer but also create mystery as you can only see the feet and will not know who the person is.
• Adding to this we added a scene with the two main characters in which they walk past each other in the rain, and the femme fatale looks at the main protagonist and he doesn't acknowledge him. This again helps create the noir feel with the rain but also generates mystery and people will want to know whats going on so therefore they will go and see the film which is our aim.